Tuesday, October 22, 2019
Incredibly Bad Resumes That Will Make You Shudder-092016
Incredibly Bad Resumes That Will Make You Shudder-092016 If youÃ¢â¬â¢re a frequent reader here at TheJobNetwork (and you totally are, right?), you know that we give you lots of information about what to do: how to structure your resume, free resume templates, what to say in an interview, how to break into your field of choice. All excellent info! But right now letÃ¢â¬â¢s flip the script a little: what do some of the fails look like? Specifically, what should your resume not look like? LetÃ¢â¬â¢s take a look at three poor souls whose bad resumes are destined for the Ã¢â¬Å"ugh, moving onÃ¢â¬ pile. Rocky is just out of school, and just applied for a senior management position. WeÃ¢â¬â¢ll call him The Mess.Rocky B. 45 Maple Sreet Philadelphia, PA 43434 Rocky@emaildomain.comObjective: To get a high-paying job. What I lack in experience, I bring in confidence.Experience:PetSmart (sales associate), September 2015 Ã¢â¬â presentBadger Sons, summer internMcDonaldÃ¢â¬â¢s (server), July 2014 Ã¢â¬â September 2014Carmichael College, September 2012 Ã¢â¬â June 2016Skills:OrganizationMoneyCommunicationComputersSocial media (RockyLovesLadeez on Twitter, Rocky B on MeFace)KarateWorking on deadlineEducation:Carmichael College Communications, 2016Hobbies:KarateBoxingKnittingOh, RockyÃ¢â¬ ¦where to start? There are lots of areas for improvement here.The LookLetÃ¢â¬â¢s talk about how this resume looks to a random reader. The font is very difficult to read, for starters. You want your resume to look clean and straightforward, not like a flyer youÃ¢â¬â¢d see taped up at the supermarket, advertising guitar lessons. The centering also adds to this flier-esque feel. For the most part, left-justify.The HeaderRocky also flubs his very first introduction to the reader: the header. Not only does he not include his last name, he leaves obvious typos in the address. Always, always, always proofread your resume. And when you think youÃ¢â¬â¢ve proofread it enough? Get someone else to read it too, just to be safe.The Objec tiveRocky doesnÃ¢â¬â¢t do much better with his objective statement, which is already in danger of being unnecessary. Rocky is seeking a high-paying job- who isnÃ¢â¬â¢t?! The objective or summary statement that you use in your resume should be put to work showing what you can offer the company. This objective tells the reader nothing about who Rocky is, what he does, or what qualifications he holds. Plus, it shows that he knows heÃ¢â¬â¢s unqualified for the job. A reader would see that and disregard him right away.The Level of EffortOverall, you can tell he didnÃ¢â¬â¢t put much time into this. ThereÃ¢â¬â¢s nothing but bare-bones information here. Under Ã¢â¬Å"Experience,Ã¢â¬ thereÃ¢â¬â¢s nothing that tells you what he did at any of those places, no context for how that experience applies to the job he wants. RockyÃ¢â¬â¢s skills donÃ¢â¬â¢t fare much better. TheyÃ¢â¬â¢re a confusing jumble of professional skills (again, not fleshed out with any useful information), and personal ones (which is extra unnecessary because he later lists his hobbies. Listing hobbies at the end of your resume isnÃ¢â¬â¢t necessarily a bad thing- it can help differentiate you in a pile of resumes. But you should be careful to list only PG ones that you wouldnÃ¢â¬â¢t mind your grandma reading about. (Rocky actually succeeds on this one!).The SkillsRocky commits an additional faux pas while listing his social media skills: itÃ¢â¬â¢s not a great idea to list your personal social media profiles unless you know theyÃ¢â¬â¢re clean and professional-looking. (Ã¢â¬Å"RockyLovesLadeezÃ¢â¬ doesnÃ¢â¬â¢t inspire much confidence that this is the case.) From start to finish, this resume is one big red flag.Ã LetÃ¢â¬â¢s look at Hilary, a.k.a. The Jokester.Hilary Peterson 88 McPherson Ave Brooklyn, NY 55555 (999) 000-1111 Comedienne69@emaildomain.comSUMMARYHard worker known for keeping it real (haha) seeking a full-time position as a writer.SKILLSSense of humorOrgani zedOutgoing personalityDealing with hecklers (the worst, amiright?)Writing on deadlineEXPERIENCESullyÃ¢â¬â¢s Irish Bar Waitress, 2006 Ã¢â¬â 2007Waited tablesProvided excellent customer serviceHandled cash and credit card transactionsWalStore Sales Associate, 2007-2007Stocked shelves and participated in inventory managementCompleted customer transactions using the storeÃ¢â¬â¢s POS system.Assisted customersSet up floor displaysPeking Restaurant Waitress, 2007-2010Waited tablesProvided excellent customer serviceHandled cash and credit card transactionsBraggianoÃ¢â¬â¢s Italian Bistro Waitress, 2007-2010Waited tablesProvided excellent customer serviceHandled cash and credit card transactionsHewitt Brothers Finance File clerk, 2010 Ã¢â¬â 2016Served as an account manager in the hedge fund division of a large multinational companyProcessed TPS reports (only mildly soul-sucking!)Maintained archive of client reports and contractsPut up with ridiculous people (kidding- everyone was cool)WRITING/EDITINGWish You Were Here (web series), 5 episodesÃ¢â¬Å"Living the DreamÃ¢â¬ (article, Buffington University Alumni Magazine), 2004The Clarion (university newspaper), editor and staff writer, 2001 Ã¢â¬â 2004EDUCATIONBuffington University B.A. in English (sigh)HilaryÃ¢â¬â¢s resume is off to a good start, in that it looks like a resume. However, she starts running into problems early on.The HeaderHilaryÃ¢â¬â¢s email address isnÃ¢â¬â¢t especially appropriate. You donÃ¢â¬â¢t need to give up your Ã¢â¬Å"funÃ¢â¬ email address (or that old AOL handle that you just canÃ¢â¬â¢t let go), but at the very least before you start your job hunt, create a new email address thatÃ¢â¬â¢s a variation of your name. You can still be HotPantz or BeerPongDude to your friends and family, but potential employers should see a more professional you.The Summary StatementYou know I love a good parenthetical joke, but thereÃ¢â¬â¢s really no place for jokes, snarky asides, or e moji-like expressions in a resume. You want to be taken seriously, so make sure you set that professional tone.The SkillsAgain, Hilary is trying to be funny, which doesnÃ¢â¬â¢t work here. She also leads with Ã¢â¬Å"sense of humor,Ã¢â¬ which is a good quality to have, but is it her number one skill? The skills section is a chance to emphasize what qualifies you for the job at hand. Hilary says she wants to get a full-time writing job, so shouldnÃ¢â¬â¢t she emphasize her writing skills?The ExperienceThere are two issues here. First, Hilary goes chronologically, rather than the backwards chronological order most common in resumes. That latter format is common for a reason: the employer wants to know who you are now, and doesnÃ¢â¬â¢t want to have to dig for that information. Second, Hilary includes jobs that donÃ¢â¬â¢t necessarily apply to the job for which sheÃ¢â¬â¢s applying. Long-ago food service and retail jobs donÃ¢â¬â¢t seem to have much bearing on the job sheÃ¢â¬â ¢s seeking here- which is also undermined by the fact that she uses the same bullets for all of her restaurant jobs. Repetitive bullets make the reader glaze right over. Hilary should be more selective about which of her jobs she chooses to spotlight in her resume- and should come up with unique bullets for each that emphasize how that experience applies to the job she wants.Hilary also buries the lede here: she puts her writing experience waaaaaay down at the end, when she should be putting it front and center to help show that she does, in fact, have writing experience that would apply to her future writing job.And last but not least, letÃ¢â¬â¢s check in with Mary, the Jargonator.Mary Hernandez 349 7th Avenue Brooklyn, NY 22222 (333) 555-6666 MaryHernandez@emaildomain.com LinkedUp profile: MHernandez.linkedup.comGo-getter who thinks outside the box looking to synergize experience and maximized skill setSKILLSSynergizing backward overflowThought leadershipResults-drivenDynamic s elf-motivatingBest of breedEXPERIENCEGrande CorpDepartment Assistant January 2013 Ã¢â¬â presentMaximize and coordinate workflowSynergize department schedulesCoordinate B2C communications (email blasts, client outreach via telecommunications)Analyze office inventoryOffer elevator pitches for social media campaignsHit the ground running every dayCOMPUTER SKILLSAdobeMicrosoft Office (PP, O, Ex)EDUCATIONMarshall Brown University B.A., WLP 2013Mary sounds very with-it and accomplishedÃ¢â¬ ¦itÃ¢â¬â¢s just a shame you canÃ¢â¬â¢t actually tell what she does.The LanguageWhen writing your resume, itÃ¢â¬â¢s important to strike a balance between clean, straightforward English. It can be tempting to use fancy-sounding jargon words instead of plain old boring ones, but you donÃ¢â¬â¢t want to do that at the expense of the readerÃ¢â¬â¢s ability to understand what youÃ¢â¬â¢re trying to say.Structurally, the resume is fine. MaryÃ¢â¬â¢s problem is the content. Terms like Ã¢â¬Å"go-ge tterÃ¢â¬ and Ã¢â¬Å"synergizedÃ¢â¬ are played out at this point, not least because they convey very little. YouÃ¢â¬â¢re much better off using a handful of strong, specific words that describe what you do/did. If Mary had written, Ã¢â¬Å"Highly motivated administrative professional with strong office skillsÃ¢â¬ as her objective, sheÃ¢â¬â¢d be better off than she is using buzz words that mean very little to the reader without context.The AbbreviationsMary uses terms like Ã¢â¬Å"B2CÃ¢â¬ and Ã¢â¬Å"WLPÃ¢â¬ throughout, without explaining what they mean. If youÃ¢â¬â¢re using an acronym that may not be readily apparent to the reader, always spell it out on the first use. For example: Business-to-consumer (B2C). If youÃ¢â¬â¢re using a term thatÃ¢â¬â¢s basic knowledge in your industry, then itÃ¢â¬â¢s probably fine to use those sparingly- but if youÃ¢â¬â¢re unsure, or you think the reader might not have deep technical knowledge of what youÃ¢â¬â¢re talking about, it never hurts to describe it a little. If the reader doesnÃ¢â¬â¢t understand fully what youÃ¢â¬â¢re saying, then itÃ¢â¬â¢s likely theyÃ¢â¬â¢ll give up early and youÃ¢â¬â¢ll lose out on a potential opportunity.When youÃ¢â¬â¢re writing your own resume, donÃ¢â¬â¢t be The Mess, The Jokester, or The Jargonator. Make sure everything is clean, professional, and clear, and youÃ¢â¬â¢ll be fine. If you have any horror-show resume moments that youÃ¢â¬â¢ve come across, be sure to reach out and share!